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let out the sparkle
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thank You so much for the long commentaries on the previous works! most of it was really very helpful and I fixed few pictures take care~
EDITS: I got most negative opinions about her legs and general composition so I changed that, I hope it looks better now thanks~~
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thank You so much for the long commentaries on the previous works! most of it was really very helpful and I fixed few pictures take care~
EDITS: I got most negative opinions about her legs and general composition so I changed that, I hope it looks better now thanks~~
Image size
1948x3543px 4.65 MB
Make
HP
Model
HP Scanjet 3800
Date Taken
Sep 5, 2012, 11:36:22 AM
© 2012 - 2024 Razurichan
Comments18
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Overall
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Technique
Impact
This is already such a simple piece but I feel that it makes a really well rounded impact on the artists eyes. The soft colours that merge into the white is very nice, but it also takes away from what there could have been; particularly background speaking, it mainly makes me wonder what the negative space is or what can replace the negative space.
One thing that did strike me when I first saw it was her right leg, it seems a little awkward in shape from the knee to the calf, that may either just be a trick of my eyes or something with how the pose is being balanced. The shading is excellent as always you really have a wonderful eyes of lighting and through out most of your other pieces, I'll say that its your strong suit to make these characters look tangible.
I enjoy the way the face was drawn, such a serene looking presence even though something tells me in that calm state that there maybe an underlying that can be seen just through the artwork.
Beautifully done as always Razuri, I hope I was able to offer any help.