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it wasn't me by Razuri-chan it wasn't me by Razuri-chan
Faighel for :iconmegan-uosiu:
I'm sorry I don't know what was I doing giving this all the creepy blood stains OTL I MADE HIM LOOK LIKE A CRIMINAL HOW
anyway, I did this today on livestream, thought my photoshop died but apparently it started working again and I decided to finish it up quickly
HOPE YOU'LL LIKE THE PIXELSSSS
also, used :iconenhlai-hai:'s fix of this picture along with the cursor xD

EDIT: shortened the neck, changed hand position a little, done some detailing, changed contrast :D
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Sabina-R Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Jezu, to jest świetne!!
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Megan-Uosiu Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
Awww!!!! <33333333333 Skończyłaś go! <333 Dziękujęę~!!! <3333333333333333333 :hug: :hug: :hug: :huggle:
Ma takie cudowne włosy. <3 *czochr, czochr* ... i... dziwny kolor oczu. owo'
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Razuri-chan Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
sama nie wiem, czemu taki mu dałam! xD miał taki jeszcze w poprzedniej wersji i stwierdzilam,ze już zostawię XDD
ciesze sie,ze sie podoba <333
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Sphery Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
Hi! :D I usually rarely comment on anything because I am the analyzing, critiquing kind, and I'm afraid people will hate me, especially because I don't show my own artwork on DA (just stalk here... my own art is up on FB or just sitting in my computer...)

Then I read your journal ;) And btw I watched your livestream for a while, too :D Only saw the head in that, though. So: overall I like the picture. It's simple, but it has a story behind it. The bloodstains to me look not like he's a criminal but like something happened that was out of his control. I'd say he was posessed by something that did something bad, or just that he's the first witness at a crimescene and touched the body.

I'll be blunt. His neck is a bit too long, and his upper body, and especially shoulders lack strength and mass. Especially because the neck is so long, it looks a bit funny altogether, the upper body area I mean. I'd say if you broadened the shoulders a little, and maybe shortened the neck, he would look "more normal" (people can have odd shoulders and longer necks than others, of course, so this is not a huge flaw, just some suggestions)

The body language is a little.. I don't know how to say it.. simple? he looks like he's in shock because his arms are just hanging flat and his hands are just hanging there, too. But I think you know that by just lifting his arms up a little or changing his hands his whole expression and the whole story behind the picture would change, too. Also, the whole piece looks hurried becasue there are no details like jewellery, images or patterns on the clothes, pockets on the pants...It looks like you created his hair and his expression with great care but then finished up the rest rather quickly. It's not like that's a huge flaw either, though. It just makes it seem like you've concentrated on those parts because they're the most meaningful things in the picture.

You're really talented and I especially enjoy your sketchwork. I'll be happy to critique every now and then, especailly if I find a drawing somewhat off. If you don't resent me now, that is :D
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Razuri-chan Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
ooo, thank You for the detailed commentary! :D
his neck wasn't a bit long xD it was waaay too long and I just fixed that :D
I also shortened his upper body a little bit
About the rushing, it does seem it's my huge disadvantage I rush with the picture when I'm satisfied with the face but for sake of this pic I added a little bit more details to his pants.
I liked how he looked kind of blank in this picture so I left expression as it is, however I changed position of his hand a little bit to make it look less stiff
thank You again :D
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Sphery Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
No problem, glad you found it helpful :D it does look much better with just slight detailing and yes, the neck! :D It's still a bit long, because of the way it connects to the shoulders maybe, but now it's like a normal long neck. The expression is great, the blankness fits him. But he is less stiff now! I know a lot of people tend to change the face rather than the body. Even if the problem is in the expression, sometimes changing the body makes it all better anyway... IT's so nice now, I'm glad I could help!

And yeah, I tend to concentrate on the face more than anything else, too... I've had to really make myself put in small details and concentrate on clothes a little more as well. My biggest problem is that I consider the picture done way too early. I always think it's not worth spending hours detailing and backgrounding and colour-refining a pic... x)
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Skye-Fate Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Student General Artist
Lovely as always :heart:
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Lil-Greenie Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012   Digital Artist
Nice!
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Ariadnei Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
wooooooo :iconicantbelieveitplz: nice!
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CondescendingArthole Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student General Artist
! Woo this looks great...as always Razberry!
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