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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Ma takie cudowne włosy. <3 *czochr, czochr* ... i... dziwny kolor oczu. owo'
ciesze sie,ze sie podoba <333
Then I read your journal
I'll be blunt. His neck is a bit too long, and his upper body, and especially shoulders lack strength and mass. Especially because the neck is so long, it looks a bit funny altogether, the upper body area I mean. I'd say if you broadened the shoulders a little, and maybe shortened the neck, he would look "more normal" (people can have odd shoulders and longer necks than others, of course, so this is not a huge flaw, just some suggestions)
The body language is a little.. I don't know how to say it.. simple? he looks like he's in shock because his arms are just hanging flat and his hands are just hanging there, too. But I think you know that by just lifting his arms up a little or changing his hands his whole expression and the whole story behind the picture would change, too. Also, the whole piece looks hurried becasue there are no details like jewellery, images or patterns on the clothes, pockets on the pants...It looks like you created his hair and his expression with great care but then finished up the rest rather quickly. It's not like that's a huge flaw either, though. It just makes it seem like you've concentrated on those parts because they're the most meaningful things in the picture.
You're really talented and I especially enjoy your sketchwork. I'll be happy to critique every now and then, especailly if I find a drawing somewhat off. If you don't resent me now, that is
his neck wasn't a bit long xD it was waaay too long and I just fixed that
I also shortened his upper body a little bit
About the rushing, it does seem it's my huge disadvantage I rush with the picture when I'm satisfied with the face but for sake of this pic I added a little bit more details to his pants.
I liked how he looked kind of blank in this picture so I left expression as it is, however I changed position of his hand a little bit to make it look less stiff
thank You again
And yeah, I tend to concentrate on the face more than anything else, too... I've had to really make myself put in small details and concentrate on clothes a little more as well. My biggest problem is that I consider the picture done way too early. I always think it's not worth spending hours detailing and backgrounding and colour-refining a pic... x)